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Wavy Curls

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Just some line art practice I did as a way to cure some boredom and get something productive done today besides casting Resin. 
I actually really like how this came out, though I may have been able to add a bit more shading to her face, I decided to leave it the way it is and not go overboard, less is more, right? 
I don't really think I gave her curls, they are kind of more like waves I think...Idk, but I still like it! 

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Canon
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MG8200 series
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This is a lovely character, her eyes are very appealing and draws you to her and her lips look so red and juicy! I like that you chose not to use just one shade of red in order to show more tones and lighting. It would've been nice if you coloured all of her, but I can see what you mean by less is more sometimes. :) You show the soft wavy hair well and her nose is cute and almost abstract like but it works! 

My criticisms for this piece would be that on the left side, it seems you've missed a lot of the lines with the marker so they almost fade away compared to the darker lines on the right. I'm not sure if it's intentional, but if it is, then I'd work more on making that gradient from thicker, bolder lines to softer, thinner ones, a lot smoother. 
Someone commented on the ear and it does appear large, but I believe that's only because the ear is a little too far forward and is like an optical illusion. I think the size of it is fine, it would just have to be moved back to be in more proportion. The hair line is also a bit too far down her forehead and I'm not really sure what the lines are underneath her parting? Her shoulders seem a little close together. 

You have done a lovely job of the eyes, they have so much going on in them with the lighting and different green tones! A lot of your lines are pretty smooth but they could be better with practice. 
In the end, I'm happy that you like this. You should like your own art so my opinion is just an opinion! Enjoy your work and your art journey. :D